Re: diagram for withdrawing - rescind/obsolete/supersede

hi Chaals, hi all:

If you  need to improve, and know what to improve in the SVG diagram, I 
have some free time to spare if a lot of fine tuning to do is mandatory..

Please include all the requirements and ideas, and for me it will be a 
pleasure to make whatever semantic visuals (language transposition) you 
mean it. to make it "understandable" for non-speaking English people who 
may be interested in the work.

Just mumbling, my email is open. IRC also active.

cheers


On 21/12/2017 14:43, Chaals McCathie Nevile wrote:
> On Thu, 21 Dec 2017 02:03:04 +0100, Virginia Fournier 
> <vfournier@apple.com> wrote:
>
>> I’d vote to put it in a backgrounder - that way it’s easier to fine 
>> tune it along the way if we need >to.
>
> My plan was to clean up the accessibility and put it into section 6.9 
> this year.
>
> I'm not sure what fine tuning there is to do on the visible image. I 
> would like to improve the accessibility of it, which I plan to work on 
> tomorrow and perhaps over the new year, but it won't look any different.
>
> And given it is a pretty simple diagram - 4 objects and their 
> connections, I don't know that there is a lot of fine tuning to do 
> unless someone wants to get a real graphics communication professional 
> to make something of it (and the two related graphics already there, 
> and the one about moving stuff to Notes that is still waiting to be 
> made).
>
> cheers
>