Hi Matthias,
I will not attend the call; regrets.
My remark: subsection .1 is redundant as it is already explained in subsection 5.2. Moreover, subsection 10.1 is not a privacy consideration as such. It has a clarifying function, which is already addressed in subsection 5.2.
Therefore, I suggest deleting subsection 10.1.
Regards,
Rob
-----Original message-----
From: Matthias Schunter (Intel Corporation)
Sent: Sunday, August 20 2017, 5:33 pm
To: public-tracking@w3.org (public-tracking@w3.org)
Subject: Call on Monday
Hi Folks,
as announced in our call 2 weeks ago, the review period for the final
draft ends tomorrow (before our call).
In the call, we will discuss any potential issues that have been
identified during the review period.
Regards,
matthias