Re: Using "tracking" in compliance document (ISSUE-203)

On 08/02/2014 12:10 AM, Roy T. Fielding wrote:
> Hi all,
> As mentioned on the last teleconference, I have been working on a draft
> proposal to address tracking-ISSUE-203 by rewriting TCS based on the
> WG decisions made for the TPE last call working draft.  I have finished
> a complete draft and uploaded it to
> Please note that this is just a draft proposal.  I used the ED format in
> order to make it easier to read and much easier for the TCS editors to
> copy and paste whatever is acceptable to the group.

Thanks for the draft, Roy.
An editorial recommendation: s/contractee/principal/ in the discussion
of Service Provider would make it clearer reading.


> I have left the issue markers where they are most appropriate, but have
> not checked for any open issues not already reflected in the TCS ED.
> I did not meddle with the definition of de-identify in this pass.
> Since this will be discussed on the next call, I will not be making
> any more changes to the draft until after the call (unless the chairs
> ask for something to be changed).  However, please try to review it
> early in the week and feel free to send comments to the list, since
> that will make the call go faster.
> Cheers,
> Roy T. Fielding                     <>
> Senior Principal Scientist, Adobe   <>

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Received on Wednesday, 6 August 2014 17:02:31 UTC