- From: David Singer <singer@apple.com>
- Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2013 14:29:13 -0700
- To: "public-tracking@w3.org List" <public-tracking@w3.org>
For the purposes of Vinay's message, I merely tried to sift out the changes that were purely editorial. For the non-editorial matters, I merely follow directions; perhaps I was wrong in suggesting that they should be 'issues'. On Sep 23, 2013, at 13:32 , "Roy T. Fielding" <fielding@gbiv.com> wrote: > On Sep 23, 2013, at 11:39 AM, David Singer wrote: > >> Hi Vinay, friends >> >> Matthias asked me to take a look, as one of the editing team, and suggest what was editorial and what you should probably raise an issue about. > > The goal of this short-term exercise is to fix at least some of > the editorial mistakes that were made in crafting the June draft, > including the arbitrary addition of non-editorial text, > that should have been fixed prior to WD publication just like > we have for all of our prior WDs. > > In other words, there are editorial ways to address the objections > to publication of the WD, and accomplishing that in short order is > what was promised by the chair. Those changes are not necessarily > editorial in nature. > > The fix is either to change the text as requested, add a > parallel option text in the draft (with option boxes), or > remove the current text from the draft pending issue resolution. > If it is editorial (and most are), then changing the text is > easiest. Otherwise, I prefer options boxes over removing the > old text, since the latter causes more editorial churn. > > ....Roy > David Singer Multimedia and Software Standards, Apple Inc.
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