- From: Karl Dubost <karld@opera.com>
- Date: Mon, 14 Nov 2011 19:26:24 -0500
- To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- Cc: "public-tracking@w3.org WG (public-tracking@w3.org)" <public-tracking@w3.org>, "Roy T. Fielding" <fielding@gbiv.com>
Mark,
cc: roy
Thanks!
Le 14 nov. 2011 à 18:46, Mark Nottingham a écrit :
> Regarding <http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-tracking-dnt-20111114/>, the draft makes liberal use of the term "cross-site."
The term is used 10 times in the document.
Some suggestions
# Abstract
Old:
This specification defines the technical mechanisms
for expressing a cross-site tracking preference via
the DNT request header field in HTTP…
New:
This specification defines the technical mechanisms
for expressing a tracking preference across sites
via the DNT request header field in HTTP
Old:
that engage in cross-site tracking
New:
that engage in tracking across sites
# Introduction
Old:
When cross-site tracking or cross-site sharing of
data collection does not match the user's
expectations regarding privacy, the result can be a
very angry customer.
New:
When tracking or sharing of data collection across
sites does not match the user's expectations
regarding privacy, the result can be a very angry
customer.
Old:
… their own preference regarding cross-site tracking
that is both simple to configure…
New:
… their own preference regarding tracking across sites
that is both simple to configure…
Old:
… to permit use of their content without cross-site
data collection …
New:
… to permit use of their content without data
collection across sites …
# 3. Determining User Preference
Old:
The goal of this protocol is to allow a user to
express their personal preference regarding
cross-site tracking to each server and web
application that they communicate with via HTTP
New:
The goal of this protocol is to allow a user to
express their personal preference regarding
tracking across sites to each server and web
application that they communicate with via HTTP
Old:
For example, a user might configure their own
user agent to tell servers "do not track me
cross-site"
New:
For example, a user might configure their own
user agent to tell servers "do not track me
across sites"
# 4.2 HTML DOM Interfaces
Old:
The NavigatorDoNotTrack interface provides a
means for the user's cross-site tracking
preference to be expressed to web applications
running within a page rendered by the user
agent.
New:
The NavigatorDoNotTrack interface provides a
means for the user's tracking (across sites)
preference to be expressed to web applications
running within a page rendered by the user
agent.
# 5. Communicating a Tracking Status
Old:
it may indicate either that the user has
chosen to allow cross-site tracking
New:
it may indicate either that the user has
chosen to allow tracking across sites
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Developer Relations & Tools, Opera Software
Received on Tuesday, 15 November 2011 00:27:10 UTC