CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv612a

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
editorial changes in response to fielding email; respec variable updates

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/03/16 22:07:11	1.141
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/03/23 00:57:27	1.142
@@ -13,10 +13,11 @@
       previousMaturity:    "WD",
       edDraftURI:  "http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html", 
       editors:  [
-        { name: "Nick Doty", url: "http://npdoty.name",
+        { name: "Nick Doty", url: "https://npdoty.name",
           company: "W3C", companyURL: "http://w3.org"},
         { name: "Heather West",
-          company: "Google", companyURL: "http://google.com/" }, 
+          company: "Google", companyURL: "http://google.com/",
+          note: "until 2014" }, 
         { name: "Justin Brookman",
           company: "CDT", companyURL: "http://cdt.org/",
           note: "until September 2013" }, 
@@ -32,6 +33,7 @@
       wgPublicList: "public-tracking",
       wgPatentURI: "http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/49311/status",
       issueBase:   "http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/track/issues/",
+      processVersion: 2005,
       localBiblio: {
         "TRACKING-DNT": {
           "authors": ["Roy T. Fielding","David Singer"],
@@ -105,10 +107,7 @@
     <section id="user">
       <h3>User</h3>
 
-      <p>A <dfn>user</dfn> is an individual human. When user agent software
-      accesses online resources, whether or not the user understands or has
-      specific knowledge of a particular request, that request is "made by the
-      user."</p>
+      <p>A <dfn>user</dfn> is a natural person who is making, or has made, use of the Web.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section id="user-agent">
@@ -456,11 +455,13 @@
       such data when:</p>
 
       <ol start="1">
-        <li>a user has explicitly-granted an exception, as described
-        below;</li>
+        <li>a user has explicitly granted consent, as described
+        below (Section <a href=
+      "#user-granted-exceptions"></a>);</li>
 
         <li>data is collected for the set of permitted uses described
-        below;</li>
+        below (Section <a href=
+      "#permitted-uses"></a>);</li>
 
         <li>or, the data is <a>permanently deidentified</a> as defined in this
         specification.
@@ -704,17 +705,16 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="user-granted-exceptions">
-    <h2>User-Granted Exceptions</h2>
+    <h2>Consent</h2>
 
     <p>A party MAY engage in practices otherwise proscribed by this
-    recommendation if the user has given explicit and informed consent. After
-    consent is received, it MAY be subsequently registered through the
+    recommendation when the user has given explicit and informed consent. After
+    consent is received, it might be subsequently registered through the
     User-Granted Exceptions API defined in the companion [[!TRACKING-DNT]]
-    document, or a party MAY obtain and record <dfn>out of band</dfn> consent
-    to disregard a Do Not Track preference using a different technology. If a
-    party is relying on out of band consent to disregard a Do Not Track
-    preference, the party MUST indicate this consent to the user agent as
-    described in the companion [[!TRACKING-DNT]] document.</p>
+    document or recorded <dfn>out of band</dfn> using a different technology. 
+    A party MUST indicate when it is relying on <a>out of band</a> consent to 
+    override a Do Not Track preference, as described in the companion
+    [[!TRACKING-DNT]] document.</p>
 
     <aside class="example">
       <p>A site may provide a settings page to its logged-in users with an

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