CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv15891

Modified Files:
	tracking-dnt.html 
Log Message:
(editorial) Another attempt at explaining the status of this document

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2013/04/17 09:52:32	1.198
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html	2013/04/22 20:55:43	1.199
@@ -47,13 +47,12 @@
         This document is an editors' strawman reflecting a snapshot of live
         discussions within the
         <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/">Tracking
-        Protection Working Group</a>.  It does not yet capture all of our work.
-        For example, we have issues that are [PENDING REVIEW] with complete
-        text proposals that have not yet made it into this draft.
-        Text in blue boxes presents multiple options the group is considering.
-        Options included in this draft should not be read as limitations on
-        the potential outcome, but rather simply as possible options that are
-        currently under consideration by the working group.
+        Protection Working Group</a>.  It does not yet capture all of our work
+        and does not constitute working group consensus.
+        Text in option boxes (highlighted with light blue background color)
+        present options that the group is currently considering, particularly
+        where consensus is known to be lacking, and should be read as a set of
+        proposals rather than as limitations on the potential outcome.
         An
         <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/track/issues/">issue tracking system</a>
         is available for recording

Received on Monday, 22 April 2013 20:55:44 UTC