Re: ISSUE-158 draft response

Looks good.

On Thu, Oct 02, 2008 at 05:15:05PM +0100, Sean Bechhofer wrote:
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>
> Hi all,
>
> Here's a draft response to Peter on [ISSUE-158], let me know what you
> think. Note *this is just a draft, not the actual response* -- I'll
> wait for feedback from the WG before replying formally to
> Peter. (Peter if you're lurking on this list feel free to post your
> thoughts at any time.)
>
> 	Sean
>
>
> Dear Peter
>
> Thank you for your comments [1]:
>
> The introduction uses some sophisticated Turtle constructs without even
> any mention of the syntax being used.  At least a pointer is required
> here.
>
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> The Turtle document is cited and referenced in Section 1.2. There are  
> also brief explanations in Sections 1.7.3 and 9.5. However, this is a  
> reasonable observation. Would moving these explanations into the  
> introduction address your concerns?
>
> Cheers,
>
> 	Sean Bechhofer
> 	Alistair Miles
>
> [ISSUE-158] http://www.w3.org/2006/07/SWD/track/issues/158
> [1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-swd-wg/2008Oct/0018.html
>
>
> --
> Sean Bechhofer
> School of Computer Science
> University of Manchester
> sean.bechhofer@manchester.ac.uk
> http://www.cs.manchester.ac.uk/people/bechhofer
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>
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>

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