- From: Benjamin Nguyen <Benjamin.Nguyen@inria.fr>
- Date: Tue, 28 Mar 2006 10:51:59 +0200
- To: Mark van Assem <mark@cs.vu.nl>
- Cc: SWBPD list <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>
Selon Mark van Assem <mark@cs.vu.nl>: > > Hi Benjamin, > > > I would prefer the order I stated, but merging the sections into > subsections + > > giving a simple title would be sufficient. > > After reconsidering this I think you're right, I'll switch the (now > sub)sections on the schema and the datamodel. > > >>>7 can be put in appendix, section 6 must be put in appendix. > >> > >>Sects. 5 and 7 explain how to query WN and the different available > >>versions. These seem important issues to the average user, so putting > >>these into appendices would diminish their visibility. > > > > > > OK but merge. > > - Sect 5: explains how to query online and that CBDs are returned > and the different URI forms. (This last subsection could be > merged with Appendix G? Or the introduction could contain more > info on the URI format? I see now there are 3 places where URI > formats are explained. This seems too much.) Merging the last subsection with appendix G seems to me the best choice, I don't think it's necessary to overload the introduction with details on hash vs. slash and other such aspects. > > - Sect 6: explains the difference between Full and Basic versions > > - Sect 7: explains the different versions (2.0, 2.1, ...), the > redirection strategy and lists the downloadable files > > Do you mean that these three sects should be merged into one? That > would be a whole section "Selecting and Querying the appropriate WN > version"? What ordering would you recommend? Yes that is what I meant, sorry if I was unclear. Ordering can stay as is, but maybe put three subsections : a- querying online & offline, b- WN basic and WN full, and c- Versionning. Move the URI format discussions to appendix (G). > > Thanks, > Mark. Kind regards, BN > > >>[1]http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/BestPractices/WNET/wn-conversion.html > >>[2]http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-swbp-wg/2006Mar/0076 > >>[3]http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-swbp-wg/2005Dec/0088 > >>[4]http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-swbp-wg/2005Dec/0092.html > >> > >>-- > >> Mark F.J. van Assem - Vrije Universiteit Amsterdam > >> markREMOVE@cs.vu.nl - http://www.cs.vu.nl/~mark > >> > >> > > > > > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > > This message was sent using IMP, the Internet Messaging Program. > > > > -- > Mark F.J. van Assem - Vrije Universiteit Amsterdam > markREMOVE@cs.vu.nl - http://www.cs.vu.nl/~mark > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- This message was sent using IMP, the Internet Messaging Program.
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