Some animation chapter rewording

Hello WG.

I had a quick look at the paced animation section after the recent
changes to it.  I have just committed some changes to make the section
more readable, and to correct some inconsistencies.  These are the
changes I made:

  * Changed the <table> to a <dl>.
  * Got rid of the mentions of vectors, since none of the list types
    can be paced now.
  * Used <sup>2</sup> instead of “^2”, etc.
  * Noted that color values may be out of gamut.
  * Reworded the recently added note about paced rotations not looking
    paced if the centre point changes.
  * Got rid of entries for the types that can’t be paced.
  * Reworded the part that said how specifying paced on a non-paceable
    data type is undefined.
  * Moved the paragraph that talked about animations operating on
    computed values to section 16.2.9, since that seems a more
    appropriate place for it.  I also reworded it and included a small
    example of how values="red; inherit; blue" is possible (if ‘inherit’
    computes to an appropriate value).

  http://dev.w3.org/SVG/profiles/1.2T/publish/animate.html#complexDistances

I also reworded the newly added paragraph in 16.2.9 that talks about the
zero value to use in “by animations”, and added a table that explicitly
mentions the zero value for each appropriate data type.

  http://dev.w3.org/SVG/profiles/1.2T/publish/animate.html#ByAnimationZeroValues

Any comments, let me know.

Thanks,

Cameron

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Cameron McCormack ≝ http://mcc.id.au/

Received on Thursday, 23 October 2008 04:43:14 UTC