Re: Title, Boilerplate, Clean-up

I propose to remove the sentence: "This document is intended to be the
basis of a standards track document, and therefore defines portions to be
normative." If there's no disagreements, I'll update the spec with this
change tomorrow.

Glen Shires

On Thu, Oct 18, 2012 at 11:37 AM, Young, Milan <Milan.Young@nuance.com>wrote:

>  The spec reads “This document is intended to be the basis of a standards
> track document , and therefore defines portions to be normative.”.  That
> statement is used in contrast to the XG report which is “entirely
> informative since it is not a standards track document.”****
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> Given: a) Moving to a WG is not part of this CGs charter, and b) The
> leadership has not transitioned to a WG as previously agreed [1], these
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> I suggest we either remove these intentions or add a transition to a WG in
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> Thanks****
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> [1]
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-speech-api/2012Jun/0139.html***
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> *From:* Glen Shires [mailto:gshires@google.com]
> *Sent:* Thursday, October 18, 2012 10:55 AM
> *To:* public-speech-api@w3.org
> *Subject:* Re: Title, Boilerplate, Clean-up****
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> I've updated the spec with these changes, except for the Copyright and
> Boilerplate changes which I will make just prior to call for final
> specification commitments.****
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> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/speech-api/rev/b43edcc7f761****
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> As always, the current draft spec is at:****
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> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/speech-api/raw-file/tip/speechapi.html****
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> On Wed, Oct 17, 2012 at 2:41 PM, Glen Shires <gshires@google.com> wrote:**
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> I propose the following clean-ups to the spec. If there's no disagreement,
> I'll update the spec with these tomorrow.****
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> Title****
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> - Change name from "Speech JavaScript API Specification" to "Web Speech
> API Specification"****
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> Copyright and Boilerplate****
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> - Update Copyright and Boilerplate per W3C CG report requirements:
> http://www.w3.org/community/reports/reqs/****
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> - Add line: "Please refer to the errata for this document, which may
> include some normative corrections." which links to an empty, placeholder
> document.****
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> Abstract / Introduction (This section is non-normative)****
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> - Move the second paragraph in the Abstract to the Introduction.
> (Referencing the "Incubator Group Final Report" both places is redundant
> and confusing.)****
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> Section 3 Use Cases (This section is non-normative)****
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> - Move "Temporal Structure of Synthesis to Provide Visual Feedback" from
> unsupported list to supported list.****
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> References****
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> - Update WebIDL to point to latest version: http://www.w3.org/TR/WebIDL/**
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> Glen Shires****
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