Re: ACTION-80 update precedence rules for binding properties

Greetings Amy, suggested changes made.

Regards, Roland



From:
Amelia A Lewis <alewis@tibco.com>
To:
Roland Merrick/UK/IBM@IBMGB
Cc:
public-soap-jms@w3.org
Date:
09/04/2009 14:36
Subject:
Re: ACTION-80 update precedence rules for binding properties



Heyo.

Content generally good; I have suggestions for tweaking, because I 
found a couple of things slightly awkward.

Section 2.2:

"If a given property is specified in more than one of these the 
following list specifies the precedence, i.e. the first will be used in 
preference to the second."

->

"If a given property is specified in more than one of these, the 
following list specifies the precedence: the first is to be used in 
preference to the second."

Added comma between clauses; make it slightly more prescriptive.

And this may be two countries divided by a single language:

"If a given property is specified more than once on the JMS URI the 
last instance of the property MUST be used."

"on the JMS URI" is awkward in American English; "in the JMS URI" is 
more common.

Amy!
On Wed, 8 Apr 2009 12:12:34 +0100, Roland Merrick wrote:
> Greetings, I have completed this action and the updated editor's 
draft[1] 
> is ready for your review.
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> [1] 
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http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8

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> Regards, Roland
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Amelia A. Lewis
Senior Architect
TIBCO/Extensibility, Inc.
alewis@tibco.com








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