- From: Amelia A Lewis <alewis@tibco.com>
- Date: Thu, 9 Apr 2009 09:36:08 -0400
- To: Roland Merrick <roland_merrick@uk.ibm.com>
- Cc: public-soap-jms@w3.org
Heyo. Content generally good; I have suggestions for tweaking, because I found a couple of things slightly awkward. Section 2.2: "If a given property is specified in more than one of these the following list specifies the precedence, i.e. the first will be used in preference to the second." -> "If a given property is specified in more than one of these, the following list specifies the precedence: the first is to be used in preference to the second." Added comma between clauses; make it slightly more prescriptive. And this may be two countries divided by a single language: "If a given property is specified more than once on the JMS URI the last instance of the property MUST be used." "on the JMS URI" is awkward in American English; "in the JMS URI" is more common. Amy! On Wed, 8 Apr 2009 12:12:34 +0100, Roland Merrick wrote: > Greetings, I have completed this action and the updated editor's draft[1] > is ready for your review. > > [1] > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8 > > Regards, Roland > > > > > > Unless stated otherwise above: > IBM United Kingdom Limited - Registered in England and Wales with number > 741598. > Registered office: PO Box 41, North Harbour, Portsmouth, Hampshire PO6 3AU > > > > > -- Amelia A. Lewis Senior Architect TIBCO/Extensibility, Inc. alewis@tibco.com
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