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- Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2008 08:32:06 +0000
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John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com> changed:
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--- Comment #2 from John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com> 2008-06-25 08:32:06 ---
f2f consensus to fix as in comment #1.
Some editorial suggestions:
- tweak comma placement
- move (impl-defined) parenthetical to end of sentence
- change "should be read" to "to be read" or similar... want the sense of must,
without using rfc2219 keywords like must or should.
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