[Bug 5720] Inconsistent languge describing sml references and schemes

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5720


John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com> changed:

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--- Comment #7 from John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com>  2008-06-16 15:44:46 ---
4.2.5 
then model processors MUST NOT [attempt to recognize any reference schemes in
it and MUST NOT] attempt to resolve it.

The portion enclosed in [] was deleted according to the diff.  It should not
have been.  Since we still use "recognize" in the context of ref schemes
(4.2.1, 4.2.2) I tend to think the deletion was accidental.  
Proposal: restore the text in []

4.1.3 the new clause in item 2 (between the commas) is pretty tortured.
from (with context):
An SML reference is unresolved if and only if all of the following is true:

   1.       It is a non-null SML reference.
   2.      None of the recognized reference schemes , of which the SML
reference is recognized as an instance, resolves to an element in the model.

Proposal: replace 2 with
2. None of the reference schemes the SML reference is recognized as using 
                              resolves to an element in the model.

The rest looks fine.


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