Re: [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website

Thanks Michael! Scott, I plan be on the Linked Life Data call Monday 
12/10 - perhaps we integrate everyone's comments, which all seem fairly 
easy to address, and then call this a wrap....what are your thoughts?

-Rich

On 11/29/2012 12:20 PM, Michael Miller wrote:
>
> hi richard and scott,
>
> richard, thanks for your great work integrating everyone's 
> contributions into a coherent whole.  it reads nicely now.
>
> some very minor editing points:
>
> ·section 2, the numbered list probably doesn't need to be numbered 
> since the questions themselves are numbered
>
> ·section 2, the second question in the numbered list is incomplete: 
> Q2: Are some relational schemas easier to make to RDF than others and 
> is a direct <http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#Q2>
>
> ·in Q2, last paragraph, 'interLinked Data' is awkward, maybe no caps 
> or a hyphen?
>
> ·Q6 ends with 'p>'
>
> ·in Q7, third bullet, 'Use of the BioPortal 
> <http://bioportal.bioontology.org/> or OntoBee 
> <http://www.ontobee.org/> for matching entities and their URIs.' is a 
> fragment, leave out the 'of' or elaborate briefly?
>
> ·in Q10, 1st paragraph, 'such as on individual web pages for resource' 
> should be 'a resource'?
>
> ·in Q11, 2nd paragraph, does '(see (Christian Bizer et al. 2009) 
> <http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#refs> for 
> further details)' need the outer parentheses?
>
> ·in Q11, Figure 2 caption, 'DbPedia' should be 'DBPedia' (it is 
> elsewhere)?
>
> cheers,
>
> michael
>
> Michael Miller
>
> Software Engineer
>
> Institute for Systems Biology
>
> *From:*M. Scott Marshall [mailto:mscottmarshall@gmail.com 
> <mailto:mscottmarshall@gmail.com>]
> *Sent:* Monday, November 26, 2012 7:53 AM
> *To:* HCLS
> *Cc:* Richard Boyce; Richard Boyce
> *Subject:* [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website
>
> Hi All,
>
> I cancelled the LLD task force teleconference due to lack of a 
> pressing agenda. I would like to pick it up again next Monday.
>
> We finally have an improved version of the RDF Guide W3C Interest 
> Group Note in HTML at:
>
> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/
>
> There might very well be "version creep" due to multiple editors and 
> versions (journal article, corrections, improvements, updates) that 
> were synchronized to some extent.
>
> Please take a look at it send comments to Richard (CCd) and myself. 
> Current plan is to talk about it next Monday, possibly moving to 
> ratify and release.
>
> I look forward to seeing some of you at the SWAT4LS events in the 
> coming days in Paris:
>
> http://www.w3.org/wiki/HCLS/SWAT4LS2012/Hackathon
>
> http://www.swat4ls.org/workshops/paris2012/
>
> Note that we are planning to support remote participation at 
> Wednesday's hackathon so please contact me if you are interested and I 
> will do my best to help you discover how to participate remotely.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Scott
>
> -- 
> M. Scott Marshall, PhD
> MAASTRO clinic, http://www.maastro.nl/en/1/
> http://eurecaproject.eu/
> https://plus.google.com/u/0/114642613065018821852/posts
> http://www.linkedin.com/pub/m-scott-marshall/5/464/a22
>


-- 
Richard Boyce, PhD
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