RE: [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website

hi richard and scott,



richard, thanks for your great work integrating everyone's contributions
into a coherent whole.  it reads nicely now.



some very minor editing points:

·         section 2, the numbered list probably doesn't need to be numbered
since the questions themselves are numbered

·         section 2, the second question in the numbered list is
incomplete: Q2: Are some relational schemas easier to make to RDF than
others and is a direct<http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#Q2>

·         in Q2, last paragraph, 'interLinked Data' is awkward, maybe no
caps or a hyphen?

·         Q6 ends with 'p>'

·         in Q7, third bullet, 'Use of the
BioPortal<http://bioportal.bioontology.org/>or
OntoBee <http://www.ontobee.org/> for matching entities and their URIs.' is
a fragment, leave out the 'of' or elaborate briefly?

·         in Q10, 1st paragraph, 'such as on individual web pages for
resource' should be 'a resource'?

·         in Q11, 2nd paragraph, does '(see (Christian Bizer et al.
2009)<http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#refs>for
further details)'
need the outer parentheses?

·         in Q11, Figure 2 caption, 'DbPedia' should be 'DBPedia' (it is
elsewhere)?



cheers,

michael



Michael Miller

Software Engineer

Institute for Systems Biology



*From:* M. Scott Marshall [mailto:mscottmarshall@gmail.com]
*Sent:* Monday, November 26, 2012 7:53 AM
*To:* HCLS
*Cc:* Richard Boyce; Richard Boyce
*Subject:* [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website



Hi All,



I cancelled the LLD task force teleconference due to lack of a pressing
agenda. I would like to pick it up again next Monday.



We finally have an improved version of the RDF Guide W3C Interest Group
Note in HTML at:

http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/



There might very well be "version creep" due to multiple editors and
versions (journal article, corrections, improvements, updates) that were
synchronized to some extent.



Please take a look at it send comments to Richard (CCd) and myself. Current
plan is to talk about it next Monday, possibly moving to ratify and release.



I look forward to seeing some of you at the SWAT4LS events in the coming
days in Paris:

http://www.w3.org/wiki/HCLS/SWAT4LS2012/Hackathon

http://www.swat4ls.org/workshops/paris2012/



Note that we are planning to support remote participation at Wednesday's
hackathon so please contact me if you are interested and I will do my best
to help you discover how to participate remotely.



Cheers,

Scott



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