- From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
- Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2024 13:08:22 -0500
- To: "Jason J.G. White" <jason@jasonjgw.net>
- Cc: public-rqtf@w3.org
Colleagues: I've concluded additional edits and believe the branch below is very nearly the content we'd like in our updated working draft. Please review and advise: http://raw.githack.com/w3c/ctaur/js2402a/ Best, Janina Jason White writes: > Thank you, Janina, for documenting that plan. > > On 28/2/24 09:21, Janina Sajka wrote: > > Dear Jason, All: > > > > I have pushed an edit addressing your point re the Abstract just in the > > past hour. Please advise whether it satisfies. > > > > Also, I agree regarding Sec. 1.2, but that edit is likely to need a > > couple days. > > > > Best, > > Janina > > > > Jason White writes: > > > On 26/2/24 19:53, Janina Sajka wrote: > > > > Note that I may make additional edits ahead of our meeting, so feel free > > > > to suggest edits in reply to this message ahead of our call. > > > Thank you, Janina. Based on an initial reading, I would make the following > > > suggestions. > > > > > > 1. In the abstract, "examples of the former" is ambiguous due to recent > > > editing - perhaps change it to be more specific about the type of tool. > > > > > > 2. The later paragraphs of section 1.2 would, I think, benefit from > > > clarification and streamlining. If you could give them a review and decide > > > whether you agree, and whether there are changes you wish to make. > > > > > > 3. In general, the revisions are progressing well, and in accord with Task > > > Force discussions. -- Janina Sajka (she/her/hers) Accessibility Consultant https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa Linux Foundation Fellow https://www.linuxfoundation.org/board-of-directors-2/
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