HI everyone
Unfortunately I’ll be apology for today’s meeting, but great work on the edits Janina and happy to support.
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From: Jason J.G. White <jason@jasonjgw.net>
Sent: Wednesday, February 28, 2024 1:59 AM
To: public-rqtf@w3.org
Subject: Re: CTAUR Updates Branch Available
On 26/2/24 19:53, Janina Sajka wrote:
Note that I may make additional edits ahead of our meeting, so feel free
to suggest edits in reply to this message ahead of our call.
Thank you, Janina. Based on an initial reading, I would make the following suggestions.
1. In the abstract, "examples of the former" is ambiguous due to recent editing - perhaps change it to be more specific about the type of tool.
2. The later paragraphs of section 1.2 would, I think, benefit from clarification and streamlining. If you could give them a review and decide whether you agree, and whether there are changes you wish to make.
3. In general, the revisions are progressing well, and in accord with Task Force discussions.
