Re: CTAUR Updates Branch Available

On 26/2/24 19:53, Janina Sajka wrote:
> Note that I may make additional edits ahead of our meeting, so feel free
> to suggest edits in reply to this message ahead of our call.

Thank you, Janina. Based on an initial reading, I would make the 
following suggestions.

1. In the abstract, "examples of the former" is ambiguous due to recent 
editing - perhaps change it to be more specific about the type of tool.

2. The later paragraphs of section 1.2 would, I think, benefit from 
clarification and streamlining. If you could give them a review and 
decide whether you agree, and whether there are changes you wish to make.

3. In general, the revisions are progressing well, and in accord with 
Task Force discussions.