Re: Immersive Environments section of Synchronization Accessibility User Requirements

cool, thanks Jason.

Josh

White, Jason J wrote on 10/02/2022 14:31:
> Thank you, Josh, for the editorial work. I propose we take up any further changes as separate issues.
> I've reviewed Josh's editorial changes and merged everything into the main branch.
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> Thanks for that Jason. I've review the new text and made some suggested editorial edits. I've pushed them to your new branch for discussion.
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> Thanks
> 
> Josh
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> White, Jason J wrote on 09/02/2022 20:07:
>> Thanks to Steve for proposing revised text this afternoon for the
>> Immersive Environments section of Synchronization Accessibility User
>> Requirements.
>>
>> I have copied Steve’s proposal (with minor changes) into a Git branch,
>> and revised the Editor’s Note accordingly. Review and comments are
>> welcome. The plan is to make whatever further changes are suggested,
>> then to merge this text into the main branch.
>>
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