Thanks for that Jason. I've review the new text and made some suggested editorial edits. I've pushed them to your new branch for discussion. https://github.com/w3c/apa/commit/2ffb3168edf8472de747651598ae8fe7126a0cc4 Thanks Josh White, Jason J wrote on 09/02/2022 20:07: > Thanks to Steve for proposing revised text this afternoon for the > Immersive Environments section of Synchronization Accessibility User > Requirements. > > I have copied Steve’s proposal (with minor changes) into a Git branch, > and revised the Editor’s Note accordingly. Review and comments are > welcome. The plan is to make whatever further changes are suggested, > then to merge this text into the main branch. > > The revised text, in the context of the entire document, can be read here: > https://raw.githack.com/w3c/apa/immersive-environments/saur/index.html > > The Pull Request is at > https://github.com/w3c/apa/pull/298 > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > This e-mail and any files transmitted with it may contain privileged or > confidential information. It is solely for use by the individual for > whom it is intended, even if addressed incorrectly. If you received this > e-mail in error, please notify the sender; do not disclose, copy, > distribute, or take any action in reliance on the contents of this > information; and delete it from your system. Any other use of this > e-mail is prohibited. > > > Thank you for your compliance. > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -- Emerging Web Technology Specialist/Accessibility (WAI/W3C)Received on Thursday, 10 February 2022 11:28:06 UTC
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