Re: Immersive Environments section of Synchronization Accessibility User Requirements

Thanks for that Jason. I've review the new text and made some suggested 
editorial edits. I've pushed them to your new branch for discussion.

https://github.com/w3c/apa/commit/2ffb3168edf8472de747651598ae8fe7126a0cc4

Thanks

Josh


White, Jason J wrote on 09/02/2022 20:07:
> Thanks to Steve for proposing revised text this afternoon for the 
> Immersive Environments section of Synchronization Accessibility User 
> Requirements.
> 
> I have copied Steve’s proposal (with minor changes) into a Git branch, 
> and revised the Editor’s Note accordingly. Review and comments are 
> welcome. The plan is to make whatever further changes are suggested, 
> then to merge this text into the main branch.
> 
> The revised text, in the context of the entire document, can be read here:
> https://raw.githack.com/w3c/apa/immersive-environments/saur/index.html
> 
> The Pull Request is at
> https://github.com/w3c/apa/pull/298
> 
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