Re: RQTF agenda+ XAUR editorial updates

Hi Jason,

Just to say a quick thanks for the catch in 3.9 - Usability and 
Affordances. I've made that change and simplified the section a little. [1]

It reads much more clearly.

Thanks

Josh

[1] 
https://github.com/w3c/apa/commit/07141bae9c027b676e3f99d3723dcf450f4bb6eb

> White, Jason J <mailto:jjwhite@ets.org>
> Tuesday 23 March 2021 18:20
> In general, I think the introductory material proposed in this draft 
> offers suitable explanatory background to readers who are not 
> specialists in disabilities or accessibility. My only substantive 
> comment, and this is relatively minor, is that the third list item 
> under section 3.9 should be rewritten for clarity.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joshue O'Connor <joconnor@w3.org>
> Sent: Tuesday, 23 March 2021 12:43
> To: RQTF <public-rqtf@w3.org>
> Cc: group-apa-chairs@w3.org; Michael Cooper <cooper@w3.org>
> Subject: RQTF agenda+ XAUR editorial updates
>
> Hi all,
>
> In preparation for publication, I have made an editorial pass at the 
> XAUR. I've not touched any of the user needs or requirements text just 
> the background, supporting content etc. I've tidied up some text, made 
> some edits to clarify and I think it reads much better.
>
> These suggested edits are in this branch.
>
> https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fraw.githack.com%2Fw3c%2Fapa%2Fxaur-march2021-abstract-edits%2Fxaur%2Findex.html&amp;data=04%7C01%7Cjjwhite%40ets.org%7Cf3dd9c059e72436b4a5e08d8ee1ac358%7C0ba6e9b760b34fae92f37e6ddd9e9b65%7C0%7C0%7C637521146028173154%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&amp;sdata=87zgIb93LNwSXLq%2Fwegwu%2F173MSPfJ7A2IqqHatqeuY%3D&amp;reserved=0
>
> Jason can we put this on the RQTF agenda for tomorrow to discuss?
>
> All comments welcome, thanks
>
> Josh
>
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> Joshue O'Connor <mailto:joconnor@w3.org>
> Tuesday 23 March 2021 16:43
> Hi all,
>
> In preparation for publication, I have made an editorial pass at the 
> XAUR. I've not touched any of the user needs or requirements text just 
> the background, supporting content etc. I've tidied up some text, made 
> some edits to clarify and I think it reads much better.
>
> These suggested edits are in this branch.
>
> http://raw.githack.com/w3c/apa/xaur-march2021-abstract-edits/xaur/index.html 
>
>
> Jason can we put this on the RQTF agenda for tomorrow to discuss?
>
> All comments welcome, thanks
>
> Josh
>


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