RE: Updated RTC Accessibility User Requirements doc ready

Thank you, Josh. I have reviewed this branch, and it reads well.

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From: Joshue O Connor <joconnor@w3.org>
Sent: Monday, March 2, 2020 9:38 AM
To: RQTF <public-rqtf@w3.org>
Subject: Updated RTC Accessibility User Requirements doc ready

Hi all,

I've spent today doing an editorial pass on the document.  While doing so also I noticed the need to tighten the language and clarify some of our user needs and related requirements. So I did so. I don't feel these changes go beyond editorial work, as they certainly clarify the meaning and intent. In the previous version, there were qualifying clauses, at the end of sentences for example. Or there may have been an illustrative example in the middle of an important clause.

You can see these changes in this branch:

https://nam01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fraw.githack.com%2Fw3c%2Fapa%2FAccessibleRTC%2Frtc%2Findex.html&amp;data=02%7C01%7Cjjwhite%40ets.org%7Cb081517446834d08400308d7beb758e7%7C0ba6e9b760b34fae92f37e6ddd9e9b65%7C0%7C0%7C637187567002498190&amp;sdata=lH5QatV7swYZxh0C7FzHu8hlsIkMugksG%2B5WicYkzOc%3D&amp;reserved=0


Please do review for any errors or omissions but I hope you will feel they improve readability and clarity of the document.

Thanks

Josh

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Emerging Web Technology Specialist/Accessibility (WAI/W3C)


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