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Updated RTC Accessibility User Requirements doc ready

From: Joshue O Connor <joconnor@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 2 Mar 2020 14:38:06 +0000
To: RQTF <public-rqtf@w3.org>
Message-ID: <d1953c9a-67a4-8a88-c7cd-785629cc1549@w3.org>
Hi all,

I've spent today doing an editorial pass on the document.  While doing 
so also I noticed the need to tighten the language and clarify some of 
our user needs and related requirements. So I did so. I don't feel these 
changes go beyond editorial work, as they certainly clarify the meaning 
and intent. In the previous version, there were qualifying clauses, at 
the end of sentences for example. Or there may have been an illustrative 
example in the middle of an important clause.

You can see these changes in this branch:

http://raw.githack.com/w3c/apa/AccessibleRTC/rtc/index.html

Please do review for any errors or omissions but I hope you will feel 
they improve readability and clarity of the document.

Thanks

Josh

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Emerging Web Technology Specialist/Accessibility (WAI/W3C)
Received on Monday, 2 March 2020 14:38:13 UTC

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