- From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
- Date: Thu, 9 May 2019 12:41:43 -0400
- To: John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com>
- Cc: Scott Hollier <scott@hollier.info>, "public-rqtf@w3.org" <public-rqtf@w3.org>
Thanks, John and Scott. I think giving cloud some definition is important. It provides context for why CDNs are even mentioned in this section. So, will continue to mull a rewrite on this ... John Foliot writes: > How about: > > The growing use of distributed, network-based delivery mechanisms (aka "the > cloud") has seen a concentration of web content and software service > delivery in the form of Content Delivery Networks (CDN) such as Akamai, > Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront > > Where "the cloud" gets some definition as well... > > JF > > On Wed, May 8, 2019 at 10:05 PM Scott Hollier <scott@hollier.info> wrote: > > > To Janina > > > > I've had a look at Section 3.3 and have a suggested change. The intro to > > the section was a little hard for me to read - I'd never come across the > > word ' parlance' before and had to look it up! > > > > As such, I'd suggest a simpler intro to the section. Here's my suggestion: > > > > Change: > > > > "While its meaning for most people may be as opaque as its meteorological > > namesake, the "cloud" has become a familiar term of common parlance. For > > our purposes here it describes the growing concentration of web content and > > software service delivery in content delivery networks (CDN) such as > > Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront" > > > > to: > > > > The growing use of the online cloud has seen a concentration of web > > content and software service delivery in the form of Content Delivery > > Networks (CDN) such as Akamai, Cloudflare, and Amazon Cloudfront > > > > Everything else reads great to me. > > > > Scott. > > > > > > > > Dr Scott Hollier > > Digital Access Specialist > > Mobile: +61 (0)430 351 909 > > Web: www.hollier.info > > > > Technology for everyone > > > > Looking to upskill your staff with digital access training? Fill the room > > for one flat fee. > > > > Keep up with digital access news by following @scotthollier on Twitter and > > subscribing to Scott's newsletter. > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net> > > Sent: Wednesday, 8 May 2019 8:47 PM > > To: public-rqtf@w3.org > > Subject: CAPTCHA Draft: Blinded Verifications Added > > > > I've finally managed to draft Sec. 3.3 now available at: > > > > https://w3c.github.io/apa/captcha/#turing-tokens-in-the-cloud > > > > -- > > > > Janina Sajka > > > > Linux Foundation Fellow > > Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup: http://a11y.org > > > > The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) > > Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa > > > > > > > > > > -- > *​John Foliot* | Principal Accessibility Strategist | W3C AC Representative > Deque Systems - Accessibility for Good > deque.com -- Janina Sajka Linux Foundation Fellow Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup: http://a11y.org The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
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