XAUR - general comments

This document has improved considerably. I appreciate the specific, easily referenced, user needs and the associated requirements for XR systems and technologies.

I haven’t noticed any shortcomings that would preclude moving toward a public working draft next year. Obviously, looking for gaps and for material that merits clarification is important, but this is exactly the process that public working drafts are meant to hasten and to make more rigorous.

Perhaps a table or other convenient summary indicating which system requirements are addressed by existing accessibility guidance (e.g., W3C/WAI guidelines) would be useful. However, this is not an immediate priority, and it may need to involve the Accessibility Guidelines Working Group at some point in the future.


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