Re: [SWC] ACTION-492: review changes in SWC

That's ACTION-492, not 6492.

Btw, I forgot to mention that the tables in sections 2 (table 1), 5.1.1, 
  8.1.3 (Rsimple), 8.1.4 (Rrdf), 8.1.5 (Rrdfs) and 8.2.3 (Normalizing 
and Embedding OWL DLP) do ont scale down to print or small screens. 
Neither do most of the productions in 8.2.1.

I do not know what can be done about it, or whether something ought to 
be done, but that makes the tables and productions useless when the 
document is printed :-(

Cheers,

Christian

  Christian de Sainte Marie wrote:

> Jos,
> 
> I reviewed SWC, as per ACTION-492, and found no objection to publishing 
> it as LC.
> 
> I have only two comments, one of them a tiny one:
> 
> - in the middle of the 5th paragraph in section 4, I had to read the 
> following sentence several times before I could parse it:
> "In the DL species, classes and properties are directly interpreted as 
> subsets of and binary relations over the domain."
> 
> Wouldn't it be better rewritten, e.g.:
> "In the DL species, classes and properties are directly interpreted as 
> subsets of the doamin, and binary relations over the domain, respectively"?
> 
> I did not do the edit myself, lest I completely misunderstood the 
> sentence :-)
> 
> - in section 5.2, the text says that "if ... the document must be 
> rejected", "if ... the combination ... must be interpreted ..." (twice) 
> and "if ... the combination ... may be interpreted ...". Should the 
> document make reference to RFC 2119 for the use of "must" and "may"? On 
> the other hand, there is no conformance clause...
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Christian
> 
> 
>

Received on Tuesday, 29 July 2008 13:15:38 UTC