Re: RDFa Primer update

Thanks Manu. At first glance, there is nothing I would not agree with:-)

Ivan

On Apr 10, 2011, at 23:55 , Manu Sporny wrote:

> Hey folks,
> 
> I had promised Ivan on one of the calls that I would make a sweep
> through the RDFa Primer and update the grammar, structure and flow of
> the document. I spent most of this weekend updating the document and I
> think I'm done. A publish-able Working Draft for the RDFa Primer has
> been prepared. It is dated for the publish date that we agreed upon last
> Thursday:
> 
> http://www.w3.org/2010/02/rdfa/drafts/2011/WD-rdfa-primer-20110419/
> 
> You can see the changes that I made in a diff-marked version from Ivan's
> version as of April 8th 2011:
> 
> http://www.w3.org/2010/02/rdfa/drafts/2011/WD-rdfa-primer-20110419/diff-rdfa-primer-20110408.html
> 
> The majority of the changes were prose/flow/grammar related in each
> section, but I tried to keep the majority of the sections in the same
> order. That is, the overall structure of the document is the same, but
> lots of changes were made in each section. Nothing much was changed
> conceptually, just the precise wording used to explain each concept.
> 
> Updates:
> 
> * Lots of grammar and prose cleanups/fixups/rewording
> * Fixed headers and document links to previous pubs/drafts
> * Removed mentions of company names such as Facebook (except in
>  appendix A, as it seemed to make sense there)
> * Made the way we express attributes consistent in the document:
>  "the <code>about</code> attribute" instead of "<tt>@about</tt>"
> * Moved the advanced examples into an appendix.
> 
> Problems:
> 
> * The document has not been put through the W3C pubrules checker yet.
> * We are using OGP in a way that is not consistent with the way that it
>  is read from a page. The OGP examples in the primer will not work in
>  the real world. We need to discuss this for the final version of the
>  document, but shouldn't let it keep us from publishing the Working
>  Draft.
> 
> -- manu
> 
> -- 
> Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny)
> President/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc.
> blog: The PaySwarm Vocabulary
> http://digitalbazaar.com/2011/03/31/payswarm-vocab/
> 


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