Re: proposed text for SPARQL Update Member Submission

On 2011-05-30, at 23:53, Lee Feigenbaum wrote:

> The document at http://www.w3.org/Submission/SPARQL-Update/ is the submission that was a large part of the input to our work on SPARQL 1.1 Update. I have an action (ACTION-296) to suggest text to be added to that URI to indicate its relationship with SPARQL 1.1 Update.
> 
> I suggest either in the abstract or status section a note that says:
> 
> """
> Please note that this W3C Member Submission has been used as input by the [link]SPARQL Working Group in producing the [link]SPARQL 1.1 Update specification. Implementers and users are encouraged to use the SPARQL 1.1 Update document as the authoritative specification for SPARQL Update.
> """
> 
> Please suggest any changes; otherwise, I'll ask Sandro to add this to the member submission URI in a few days.

"for SPARQL Update" -> "for SPARQL updates"?

Otherwise, looks fine to me.

- Steve

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