Re: proposed text for SPARQL Update Member Submission

Hi,

On 30 May 2011, at 23:53, Lee Feigenbaum wrote:

> The document at http://www.w3.org/Submission/SPARQL-Update/ is the submission that was a large part of the input to our work on SPARQL 1.1 Update. I have an action (ACTION-296) to suggest text to be added to that URI to indicate its relationship with SPARQL 1.1 Update.
> 
> I suggest either in the abstract or status section a note that says:
> 
> """
> Please note that this W3C Member Submission has been used as input by the [link]SPARQL Working Group in producing the [link]SPARQL 1.1 Update specification. Implementers and users are encouraged to use the SPARQL 1.1 Update document as the authoritative specification for SPARQL Update.
> """
> 

Maybe:

"are encouraged" => "should"

"as the authoritative specification for SPARQL Update" => "as the authoritative specification for managing updates of RDF data"

m2c

Alex.

> Please suggest any changes; otherwise, I'll ask Sandro to add this to the member submission URI in a few days.
> 
> thanks,
> Lee
> 

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Dr. Alexandre Passant, 
Social Software Unit Leader
Digital Enterprise Research Institute, 
National University of Ireland, Galway

Received on Tuesday, 31 May 2011 09:53:22 UTC