- From: Carlos Buil Aranda <cbuil@fi.upm.es>
- Date: Wed, 18 May 2011 10:56:50 -0400
- To: Olivier Corby <Olivier.Corby@sophia.inria.fr>
- Cc: public-rdf-dawg@w3.org
- Message-ID: <BANLkTi=nvoxU1rZph4LXO8ORg1AB4w9taA@mail.gmail.com>
dear all, I fixed all Olivier's comments. They were mainly syntactic and I agreed with them. cheers, Carlos 2011/5/18 Olivier Corby <Olivier.Corby@sophia.inria.fr> > Action 463: remarks about SPARQL 1.1 Federated Query document for LC. > http://www.w3.org/2009/sparql/docs/fed/service.xml > > > Best regards, > > Olivier > > > > 1.1.1 Namespaces > > from the SPARQL1.1 Query > -> > from the SPARQL 1.1 Query > > -- add a " " > > > > > 1.1.3 Terminology > > The following terms are defined in SPARQL Query Language 1.1 > -> > SPARQL 1.1 Query Language > > > > > Solution Mapping (corresponds to the Concepts and Abstract Syntax term > "RDF URI reference") > -> > IRI (corresponds to the Concepts and Abstract Syntax term "RDF URI > reference") > > > > 2.1 Simple query to a remote SPARQL endpoint > > the people I know > -> > the people we know > > > > and I want to combine > -> > and we want to combine > > > > > 2.2 SPARQL query with OPTIONAL to two remote SPARQL endpoints > > Data in default graph at service: <http://people.example/sparql><http://people.example/sparql> > -> > <http://people.example.org/sparql> <http://people.example.org/sparql> > > > > Query: > SERVICE <http://people.example/sparql> <http://people.example/sparql> { > -> > SERVICE <http://people.example.org/sparql><http://people.example.org/sparql>{ > > > > 2.3 Variable Services > > http://projects1.example/SPARQL > -> > http://projects1.example.org/SPARQL > > same for projects2 and projects2 > > > > 2.3 Variable Services > > This query, on the data above, has four solutions: > -> > three solutions > > > > 2.4 Boundedness Condition > > For example, the SPARQL graph pattern > -> > For example, in the SPARQL graph pattern > > > > > ?Y is not strongly bound > -> > add a reference to the definition of strongly bound below > > > > > { ?X :p :o SERVICE ?Y { ?Z :p :o } SERVICE ?X { ?Y :p :o } } The > -> > a "." is missing before The > > > > > 2.5 Service Execution Failure > > unbounded > -> > unbound > > > > > If the 'SILENT' token it is not present > -> > If the 'SILENT' token is not present > > > > Data in <http://people.example/sparql> <http://people.example/sparql>endpoint: > -> > http://people.example.org/sparql > > > > 2.6 BINDINGS > > SPARQL 1.1 Query includes the BINDINGS clause (Section 18.2.5.6 BINDINGS) > -> > Section 10.2 BINDINGS > > > > > 3.1 Definition of SERVICE > > Tranform(syntax form): > -> > Tranform (syntax form): > > > > > Section 18.2.2.4 Translate Graph > -> > Section 18.2.2.5 > > (may be not a good idea to duplicate section numbers as they may change) > > > > > Let SilentOp := boolean, SERVICE indicating error behavior. > -> > Let SilentOp := boolean, indicating SERVICE error behavior. > > > > > Example: a SERVICE graph pattern in a series of joins: > > ... WHERE { { ?s :p1 ?v1 } SERVICE <srvc> {?s :p2 ?v2 } { ?s :p3 ?v2 } } > > > Join( Service( <srvc>, > BGP( ?s :p1 ?v1 ), > BGP( ?s :p2 ?v2 ), false ), > BGP( ?s :p3 ?v2 ) ) > > -> > BGP( ?s :p1 ?v1 ) should not be inside service > > > > Example: a SERVICE SILENT graph pattern in a series of joins: > > same remark as above > > > > > Definition: Evaluation of a Service Pattern > > vars is the set of variables in pattern P > -> > I think that vars should be the variables in-scope in P because they are > used as "select vars where P" > > > > if IRI is a SPARQL service > Service(IRI,G,P,SilentOp)) = Invocation( IRI, vars, P, Bindings(G, vars), > SilentOp ) > -> > eval(D(G), Service(IRI,G,P,SilentOp)) = Invocation( IRI, vars, P, > Bindings(G, vars), SilentOp ) > > > > The evaluation of graph uses the SPARQL algebra union operator. > -> > The evaluation of service > > > > Definition: Strongly bound variable > > P = P1 GROUP BY E1 ... n > -> > P = P1 GROUP BY E1 ... En > > > > > (what I want say here is that it is not possible to guarantee that a > variable will be bounded after a SERVICE execution). > -> > (It is not possible to guarantee that a variable will be bounded after a > SERVICE execution). > > > > UNBOUND is not a possible value for a ?Xi in BindingValues. > -> > UNBOUND is not a possible value for ?Xi in BindingValues. > > > > P = GRAPH ?X { P1 } and ?X is strongly bound > -> > P = GRAPH ?X { P1 } > > > > Definition: Service safeness > > it hold that > -> > it holds that > > > > 4.1 Grammar > > > The formal definition for the SPARQL 1.1 Federated Query grammar is > provided with the SPARQL 1.1 Query grammar > -> > add a "." at the end > > > > It is a syntax error if to use > -> > It is considered as a syntax error to use > > > > as the first argument to a > -> > as the first argument of a > > > > > 5 Conformance > > > See section 7 Internet Media Type for conformance to the > application/sparql-query media type. > -> > there is no such section 7, should be removed > > > > SPARQL 1.1 Query Language for RDF > -> > SPARQL 1.1 Query Language > > > > 6 Security Considerations (Informative) > > SPARQL Query 1.1 [SQRY] Section 18 > -> > SPARQL 1.1 Query [SQRY] Section 21 > > >
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