Wording Fixes for section 12.6

Sorry, I should have done this earlier. (Thanks to Lee for pushing my 
nose to the grindstone.)

Some changes needed to the wording in section 12.6.

Third para, replace

"An entailment regime is a transitive idempotent binary relation 
between subsets of RDF graphs. A graph in the range of an entailment 
regime E is called well-formed for the regime."

by

"An <i>entailment regime</i> specifies (1) a subset of RDF graphs 
called <i>well-formed</i> for the regime, and (2) an 
<i>entailment</i> relation between subsets of well-formed graphs and 
well-formed graphs."

para 4, insert new second sentence. "Of these, only OWL-DL entailment 
restricts the set of well-formed graphs."

para 5, second sentence, replace

"For example, "-1"^^xsd:positiveInteger is inconsistent with respect 
to D-entailment."

by

"For example, the RDF graph

_:x rdf:type xsd:string .
_:x rdf:type xsd:decimal .

is D-inconsistent when D contains the XSD datatypes."

(Or, use some other example of a datatype clash from 
http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf-mt/#defDinterp )(Or, omit.)

To help overcome some of Fred's objections to how this is worded, it 
might help also to link the first mention of the 'scoping graph' in 
the first SPARQL condition to the explanation at
http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/DataAccess/rq23/rq25.html#BGPsparqlBNodes
Or if y'all don't like internal links, give an explicit reference to 
section 12.3.2.

Pat
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