- From: Pat Hayes <phayes@ihmc.us>
- Date: Mon, 4 Oct 2004 15:05:56 -0500
- To: Kendall Clark <kendall@monkeyfist.com>
- Cc: public-rdf-dawg@w3.org
> RDF Data Access Use Cases and Requirements
> Revision: 1.138, Date: 2004/10/01 19:56:52
> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/DataAccess/UseCases
>
>is ready for review for publication.
>
>Kendall
Further to
ACTION PatH: Review UC&R draft appearing around Oct1, for Oct5 telcon
(in http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-dawg/2004JulSep/0573.html)
I have reviewed the above and find it suitable for publication.
Minior editorial quibbles follow, all optional.
2.3 consider relocating figure 3 to later in the section.
2.5 Niel? (Neil?)
2.9 "programmatically process" ? (= program ?)
2.15 Mr X has two personae, why does he need three PPDs?
2.17 Suggest 'class tree hierarchy' --> 'subclass hierarchy', since
classes need not (and often do not ) form trees under subclassing.
3.10 'note' Is there a link to something in the WG archives that
could be inserted here?
4.2.1/4.2.2 There is an obvious question here which is left
unanswered, which is *how* to refer to the source or sources. Also it
is rather grating that these two requirements use non-graph
terminology ('source', 'repository', etc.) , suggesting for example
that these are talking about something distinct from what 4.2.3 is
talking about.
4.9 Does'directly' here imply anything special? Suggest either add
brief expansion/exposition, or else omit.
Pat
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