Re: Responses to David's pre-CR review

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> > Section 7.3
> >
> > * "in the data values of either column" - Would it be helpful to add the
> word "referenced", so this would read: "in the data values of either
> _referenced_ column"?
>
> Changed. I also replaced “contains multiple columns” with “references
> multiple columns” earlier in the sentence for consistency.
>
>
It looks like this was messed up in the editing. I think "template
references multiple pairs" should be changed back to "template contains
multiple pairs". Alternatively the sentence can be re-worked to describe
columns in both places.

-David

Received on Tuesday, 24 January 2012 18:20:46 UTC