UC&R review comments [Re: Comments by this evening]

Attached is my review comments in pdf format. 

This is the color convention I used: 

    • green => suggested insertion 
    • red/pink => suggested deletion 
    • blue/yellow => consider changing 

Thanks, 
- Souri. 

Harry Halpin wrote: 

Note everyone,

   As agreed, everyone (including Ahmed) please send in any final comments
this evening, in order to give the editors (Michael) time enough to
respond to them. Michael - also - please attempt to respond to all
comments (including doing actual non-substantive textual changes to the
document) before our next telecon on Tuesday.

      cheers,
          harry