[Bug 29886] New: [SER31] 6 XHTML Output Method

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=29886

            Bug ID: 29886
           Summary: [SER31] 6 XHTML Output Method
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Candidate Recommendation
          Hardware: PC
                OS: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: editorial
          Priority: P2
         Component: Serialization 3.1
          Assignee: cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com
          Reporter: tim@cbcl.co.uk
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
  Target Milestone: ---

The following sentence reads badly, probably in an effort to avoid ending a
sentence of a preposition.

"The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a
conforming document, but there are restrictions on which elements they can
appear."

To avoid saying

"but there are restrictions on on which elements they can appear."

perhaps

"The [POLYGLOT] specification permits namespace declarations to appear in a
conforming document, but restricts the elements on which they can appear."

would be better?

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Received on Thursday, 29 September 2016 15:31:35 UTC