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[Bug 29874] New: [SER31] 5 XML Output Method

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Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2016 11:52:47 +0000
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https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=29874

            Bug ID: 29874
           Summary: [SER31] 5 XML Output Method
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Candidate Recommendation
          Hardware: PC
                OS: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Serialization 3.1
          Assignee: cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com
          Reporter: tim@cbcl.co.uk
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
  Target Milestone: ---

"The XML output method serializes the normalized sequence as an XML entity that
MUST satisfy the rules for either a well-formed XML document entity or a
well-formed XML external general parsed entity, or both."

Would this read better as

"The XML output method serializes the normalized sequence as an XML entity that
MUST satisfy the rules for either a well-formed XML document entity, a
well-formed XML external general parsed entity, or both"


Further down, since the bullet points are sentences, should the preceding colon
be a full stop?

"The result of serialization MUST be such that the reconstructed tree is the
same as the result tree except for the following permitted differences:"

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