[Bug 29849] New: [SER31] 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means of a Data Model Instance

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=29849

            Bug ID: 29849
           Summary: [SER31] 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means
                    of a Data Model Instance
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Candidate Recommendation
          Hardware: PC
                OS: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Serialization 3.1
          Assignee: cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com
          Reporter: tim@cbcl.co.uk
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
  Target Milestone: ---

In this seciton we read

"If the result of evaluating this expression for a particular serialization
parameter is the empty sequence:"

which introduces a bullet-pointed list, beginning "if".

I think the colon should be replaced by ", then"

"If the result of evaluating this expression for a particular serialization
parameter is the empty sequence, then"

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Received on Wednesday, 21 September 2016 12:30:31 UTC