[Bug 29848] New: [SER31] 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means of a Data Model Instance

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=29848

            Bug ID: 29848
           Summary: [SER31] 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means
                    of a Data Model Instance
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Candidate Recommendation
          Hardware: PC
                OS: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: editorial
          Priority: P2
         Component: Serialization 3.1
          Assignee: cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com
          Reporter: tim@cbcl.co.uk
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
  Target Milestone: ---

In 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means of a Data Model Instance, the
text:

"with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, the
param-name variable having as its value a value of type xs:string equal to the
local part of the name of the particular serialization parameter, ..."

seemed a little awkward.  Perhaps one of the following would suffice?

"with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, the
param-name variable bound to a value of type xs:string equal to the local part
of the name of the particular serialization parameter, ..."

or

"with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, a value of
type xs:string equal to the local part of the name of the particular
serialization parameter as the param-name variable, ..."

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Received on Wednesday, 21 September 2016 12:13:31 UTC