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[Bug 29894] New: [XQX31] Suggested rewording

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Date: Tue, 04 Oct 2016 08:09:34 +0000
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            Bug ID: 29894
           Summary: [XQX31] Suggested rewording
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Working drafts
          Hardware: PC
                OS: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: XQueryX 3.1
          Assignee: jim.melton@acm.org
          Reporter: andrew_coleman@uk.ibm.com
        QA Contact: public-qt-comments@w3.org
  Target Milestone: ---

In section 3 (Examples), first paragraph is a sentence starting with:

"That produced XQuery is presented only as a sanity-check..."

This is slightly awkward to read.  I suggest changing it to:

"The generated XQuery is presented only as a sanity-check..."


Appendix B (Transforming XQueryX to XQuery) starts with:

"The following stylesheet converts from XQueryX syntax to XML Query syntax"

Everywhere else, we refer to XQuery as XQuery, not XML Query.  I suggest, for
consistency, we change this sentence to:

"The following stylesheet converts from XQueryX syntax to XQuery syntax"

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