[Bug 10949] New: [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=10949

           Summary: [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Member-only Editors Drafts
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Linux
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: XQuery 1.1
        AssignedTo: jonathan.robie@redhat.com
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration

[1]
"A decimal-format declaration defines statically known decimal formats,"
    It would be more consistent to say something like:
    "A decimal-format declaration defines a decimal format,"
    or
    "A decimal-format declaration adds a decimal format to the statically
    known decimal formats,"

[2]
"It is a static error for a query prolog to contain two decimal formats
with the same name, or to contain two default decimal formats.
[err:XQST0111]."
    A query prolog doesn't 'contain' decimal formats.
    You can say either that:
        it contains decimal-format declarations,
    or that
        it declares/defines decimal formats.

    Also, the "[err:XQST0111]" shouldn't be a separate sentence.

[3]
"It is a static error for a decimal-format to specify..."
    After "decimal-format", insert "declaration".

[4]
"It is a static error if [...] the properties [...] do not each have
distinct values."
    Delete "each".

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Received on Friday, 1 October 2010 08:07:52 UTC