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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=10949 Summary: [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT Version: Member-only Editors Drafts Platform: PC OS/Version: Linux Status: NEW Severity: normal Priority: P2 Component: XQuery 1.1 AssignedTo: jonathan.robie@redhat.com ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration [1] "A decimal-format declaration defines statically known decimal formats," It would be more consistent to say something like: "A decimal-format declaration defines a decimal format," or "A decimal-format declaration adds a decimal format to the statically known decimal formats," [2] "It is a static error for a query prolog to contain two decimal formats with the same name, or to contain two default decimal formats. [err:XQST0111]." A query prolog doesn't 'contain' decimal formats. You can say either that: it contains decimal-format declarations, or that it declares/defines decimal formats. Also, the "[err:XQST0111]" shouldn't be a separate sentence. [3] "It is a static error for a decimal-format to specify..." After "decimal-format", insert "declaration". [4] "It is a static error if [...] the properties [...] do not each have distinct values." Delete "each". -- Configure bugmail: http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/userprefs.cgi?tab=email ------- You are receiving this mail because: ------- You are the QA contact for the bug.
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