[Bug 3860] [FS] editorial: 2.1.3 Notations for environments

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• Date: Wed, 25 Oct 2006 00:24:24 +0000
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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3860

           Summary: [FS] editorial: 2.1.3 Notations for environments
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Candidate Recommendation
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: minor
          Priority: P2
         Component: Formal Semantics
        AssignedTo: simeon@us.ibm.com
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


"Then it is updated a second time"
    This is misleading wording, because in this example, no environment is
    updated twice. There are two updates, but the second update happens to
    the environment that was created by the first update.
    Change to "Then this second environment is updated"

Received on Wednesday, 25 October 2006 00:24:35 UTC