[FT] Editorial on 1.1

• From: Elliotte Harold <elharo@metalab.unc.edu>
• Date: Fri, 05 May 2006 15:29:05 -0400
• To: public-qt-comments@w3.org
• Message-ID: <445BA781.9060402@metalab.unc.edu>

A minor editorial suggestion. In section 1.1 we see:

A similar requirement for full-text search led ISO to define the 
SQL/MM-FT [SQL/MM] standard. SQL/MM-FT [SQL/MM] defines extensions to 
SQL to express full-text searches providing similar functionality as 
does this full-text language extension to XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0.


There's no need to specify the abbreviation for and provide the same 
link for SQL/MM in two separate sentences. Just the first time woudl 
suffice.

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