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[UPD] Definition in Introduction section

From: <karl@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 04 Jul 2006 04:36:03 -0000
To: public-qt-comments@w3.org
Message-Id: <20060704043613.1646F4EFED@homer.w3.org>

Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "XQuery Update Facility"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-xqupdate-20060508/
2006-05-08
2nd WD 

About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-xqupdate-20060508/#introduction

         [Definition: Within this document, the term 
         XQuery refers to the language specified by 
         [XQuery 1.0].] 

I suggest to remove "Within this document", which seems to be inconsistent with the other definitions and not useful out of the context of the document.




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