[Bug 1773] New: [FS] editorial: 8.2.1 Principal Node Kind from bugzilla@wiggum.w3.org on 2005-07-20 (public-qt-comments@w3.org from July 2005)

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           Summary: [FS] editorial: 8.2.1 Principal Node Kind
           Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
           Version: Last Call drafts
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Formal Semantics
        AssignedTo: simeon@us.ibm.com
        ReportedBy: jmdyck@ibiblio.org
         QAContact: public-qt-comments@w3.org


8.2.1 Principal Node Kind

Notation
"The following auxiliary grammar production describe principal node types"
    s/describe/describes/
    s/types/kinds/ ?

"Axis principal PrincipalNodeKind"
    "has principal" would be more readable.
    Or "PrincipalNodeKind is principal of Axis" would be even better.

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