- From: Don Chamberlin <chamberl@almaden.ibm.com>
- Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2004 17:53:08 -0800
- To: public-qt-comments@w3.org
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(IBM-FO-021) Editorial comments on Functions and Operators: (a) Section 1, Introduction: "as well as the two datatypes defined in Section 1.5". Actually, there are three datatypes defined in this section, which should have a more general title. (b) Section 1.2, Function Signatures and Descriptions: "the following four functions signatures" should be "the following four function signatures" (function is not plural). (c) Section 1.2, Function Signatures and Descriptions: In the paragraph beginning "For most functions", "a initial paragraph" should be "an initial paragraph". (d) Section 1.3, Namespace Terminology: This section could be merged with Section 1.8, Terminology. (e) Section 1.4, Type Hierarchy: First paragraph lists the type xs:IDREFS twice in the same enumeration (once with a colon and once without). (f) Section 1.5.2, xdt:untypedAtomic: "a XML Schema" should be "an XML Schema". (g) Section 6.4.1, fn:abs(): says "the type of the return is the parent numeric type." The term "base type" would be better than "parent type". Same comment applies to sections 6.4.2 (fn:ceiling), 6.4.3 (fn:floor), 6.4.4 (fn:round), and 6.4.5 (fn:round-half-to-even). --Don Chamberlin
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