- From: Stephen Buxton <Stephen.Buxton@oracle.com>
- Date: 17 Feb 04 11:44:21
- To: public-qt-comments@w3.org
- Cc:
SECTION 4: XML output method Sixth open circle bullet: "Additional namespace nodes may be present in the new tree if the serialization process undeclared namespaces...". On first reading, this sentence seemed ungrammatical. The problem was that it felt like "the serialization" was the subject, and "process" was the verb, which should either be "processes" or "processed", and then "undeclared namespaces" would be the direct object. Rewording it as "Additional namespace nodes may be present in the new tree if the serialization process undeclared one or more namespaces..." might help. - Steve B.
Received on Tuesday, 17 February 2004 14:44:25 UTC