- From: Michael Dyck <jmdyck@ibiblio.org>
- Date: Fri, 13 Feb 2004 18:19:49 -0800
- To: public-qt-comments@w3.org
XQuery 1.0: An XML Query Language
W3C Working Draft 12 November 2003
Here are some comments from
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-qt-comments/2002Aug/0021.html
that did not receive a response from the WG.
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A.1 EBNF
"The following grammar uses the same Basic Extended Backus-Naur Form
(EBNF) notation as [XML 1.0], except that grammar symbols always have
initial capital letters."
I still wonder what the reason for this exception is.
And that isn't the only difference from the notation used in XML.
In fact, you immediately discuss two others -- the <> terminal
groupings, and the /**/ production comments. Another is the use (in
prodns [11,19,21,26]) of references to symbols in other
specifications. Maybe you could just change "except that" to
something like "with the following minor differences".
Also (this isn't actually a leftover comment, but while I'm here):
there's no reason to capitalize the word "Basic". The XML spec
itself uses the word "simple".
(These comments also apply to a similar sentence in 1 Introduction.)
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A.2 Lexical structure
"The rules for calculating these states are given in the A.2.2 Lexical
Rules section."
No, A.2.2 does not give rules for calculating the states.
-Michael Dyck
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