RE: DRAFT of email to PBG announcing next meeting, new co-chairs, etc.

Hi,
 
Way too much lingo. Let's try to make this understandable to people who are
not totally emersed in W3C and the work we have done so far.
 
In the message, say Publishing Business Group (PBG) and after that be
consistent and say PBG.
 
I would think that reference to the Steering Committee would be the PBG
Steering Committee.
 
Best
George
 
 
From: Bill McCoy [mailto:bmccoy@w3.org] 
Sent: Monday, January 1, 2018 1:46 PM
To: 'W3C Publishing Steering Committee' <public-publishing-sc@w3.org>
Subject: DRAFT of email to PBG announcing next meeting, new co-chairs, etc.
 
Dear PBG Steering Committee members,

Happy New Year! It was a productive and certainly "interesting" 2017 for
publishing, EPUB, and the Open Web Platform, and I'm looking forward to a
very fruitful 2018.
 
Last Thurs your new co-chairs (Rick, Liisa, Luc) had a call with Ivan and
myself and we discussed, and I then drafted, fodder for announcement to the
PBG as a whole about the new co-chairs, proposed Steering Committee refocus,
and next call. It has had some feedback since then but due to holidays not
all of the co-chairs have had a chance to weigh in yet. But since we wanted
to send out announcement on Jan 2 or at latest Jan 3, please go ahead and
have a look at, and feel free to suggest edits to, the Google Doc at
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WbOcHd3kuzSiqjThIYymW9PeQ2ry2tjj8U-ghiGz
n90/edit?usp=sharing  
 
Also during Thursday's call we further refined the previously drafted goals
and activities document, mainly adding higher-level goals. See:
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jpw0KA9StAnWZAaIMqnITmdSOchIZeQIvphX5Am
Aulg/edit?usp=sharing>
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jpw0KA9StAnWZAaIMqnITmdSOchIZeQIvphX5AmA
ulg/edit?usp=sharing but no need for excess polish in the sense that this is
proposed (per the email draft) to be discussed at our next PBG call.
 
Thanks,
 
--Bill